Friday, March 27, 2015

A Matter Of Trust #2

Right now I'm reading the book "A Matter Of Trust." and it has a lot of drama in it like theres this boy named Hakeem and he has this problem with stuttering a lot when he talks and he can't control it and he randomly starts talking to this girl Brisana and when they start talking she starts getting rides from him on his motorcycle but that all just starts happening after Darcy starts talking to Tarah and Cooper which Brisana doesn't like either of them and Brisana was once really close with Darcy but no so much anymore because of that. Darcy is a really good friend to Hakeem like she told him to try out for the talent show because he can sing and play guitar and he doesn't stutter when he sings so she told him that he should since she thinks that he is good at it Hakeem started to sing this song around Darcy and then she was surprised so she asked him "Did you write that?" and he said that he did. After she told Hakeem that he should try out for the talent show he really didn't want to because he thought he would make a fool out of him self since he stutters.. but since Darcy is such a good friend she told Hakeem "I will if you will," then Hakeem told her with a smile on his face "Okay. Deal. Maybe we'll both make such fools of ourselves we'll have to run away to a deserters island and hide."

The conflict to this story is Darcy likes Hakeem but because Darcy and Brisana are not friends anymore Brisana is starting to try to get close to Hakeem to take him from Darcy since she knows it would bother Darcy. The only reason Brisana doesn't talk to Darcy anymore is because she started talking Tarah and Cooper again, Darcy doesn't mean to start anything with Brisana but she confronts her about her talking to Hakeem she tells her "I know you're being fake with Hakeem," but Darcy really was she had told Brisana "Besides if all of a sudden you can find solo much in common with losers like Tarah and Cooper, surely I can change my mind about Hakeem. Which reminds me, Ive got to run. Hakeem's waiting for me in class." she just said that to get Darcy jealous because she knows that she already is. Darcy tried to block Brisana as she walked away and then Brisana fell against a row of lockers and scraped her knee and started bleeding "Look what you did!" Brisana yells "I didn't do anything! Can I help it if you're so clumsy trying to walk on those stupid mile high heels." but after everything Darcy was so mad that she started shaking in English class she couldn't believe the fact that she had almost got in a fight with Brisana over Hakeem. 

2 comments:

  1. Ange,
    It seems like you really like this book! You are describing it so well. Make sure to go back and edit your sentences. You are writing like you talk and there are places where you need to put a period or a comma. Good job honey! I am so glad you like it! Great detail of the conflict! Make sure to describe the conflict...what type?

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  2. Also...make sure to describe where the book takes place. Describe when they go from one place to another if it has an impact on the story.

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